Re: Information

by kairiandroxas Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:50 pm

i prefer humor over sadistic any day...

hey... sailor cheated... sorta...

by sailorstar165 Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:51 pm

How'd I cheat? I formatted it, and I figured more people would find the thing if it was in my profile (not that anyone really reads my profile...)

by kairiandroxas Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:53 pm

i was kidding! I'm glad you did that, cause now people will actually see that there is a yourrole profile

by sailorstar165 Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:57 pm

*nods* I have it favorited too.

by love4Sora Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:19 pm

same here.

i'm trying to think though....what could be do to make hot springs more popular? and it's not only humorous, there's some romance going on, too!

by sailorstar165 Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:22 pm

...Find a "Read Me" forum on the site? Start a community full of only Ouran High fics on your account and move it there? Tell friends about it?

by sailorstar165 Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:24 pm

...I checked and can see the problem:

Too many giant paragraphs. No one likes reading huge blocks of text. That's why everyone detests reading classics at school.

Try breaking the paragraphs up just a tiny bit more.

by xTwilightxAngelx Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:31 pm

GOD DAMN IT!!!!
I ASKED IF I SHOULD BREAK UP THE PARAGRAPH AND SHORTEN IT AND ALL OF YOU SAID F***ING NO!!!

rawr
.............................................................
gomen hmwk has been pissing me off

by love4Sora Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:44 pm

O.O the homework thing is understandable (in my opinion) but i thought it was good making the chapters longer........

by xTwilightxAngelx Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:51 pm

well apparently not.... annoyed

by love4Sora Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:56 pm

well......maybe you could make them a little shorter. i like their length now...but if everyone else doesn't, then..... >.<

by kairiandroxas Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:25 pm

you know... i could shorten the paragraphs tomorrow after school, if you want me to...

by love4Sora Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:34 pm

this is twilight's project, so ask him, not me.

by xTwilightxAngelx Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:37 pm

...if you really want kairi...it would put a dent in my ego but if you insist

by kairiandroxas Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:58 pm

i don't want to put a dent in your ego!! i know you've had a ton of homework, so i didn't know if you wanted to do it

by xTwilightxAngelx Mon Dec 08, 2008 8:34 am

well think about it
im complaining about how i sux at it (since sailor is apparently so much better) and if i have someone else fix it for me then it gets popular that further proves that i'm no good at this
i'll get to it eventually

by sailorstar165 Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:39 pm

Twilight, don't complain. >_< God, you sound like a girl, complaining so much!

I just use fanfiction a lot and decided to edit a story plottline that a lot of people tend to like.

I also took some (not a lot) creative liscense when putting it in fanfiction format so that it made sense. It doesn't sound like raw RP posts because I editted a bit more to make it flow better.

The secret: put everything in the right order and then reread the story objectively like a reader. If something doesn't make sense, either scrap it (if possible) or explain it in a little more detail, even if the explanation wasn't there to begin with. If something is completely pointless and was just so someone could get their two-sense in so everyone knew so-and-so was still hanging around, delete it. If something seems broken or too sudden, add to it. If something seems to long and drawn out, abridge it. IF PARAGRAPHS ARE HUGE CHUNKS, SPLIT THEM UP A BIT MORE!

It's little tricks like that that make people want to read it. Smile

by xTwilightxAngelx Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:42 pm

thanxs for the advice but heres what i have to say on your comment on complaining

look at who im talking to during the majority of my free time
its almost all girls!
you pick things up from the people you socialize with

by sailorstar165 Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:46 pm

True. And your from the gay capital of the world, or at least Ohio. Very Happy

by xTwilightxAngelx Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:47 pm

.....grrrr grumble grumble grumble....anyways back on the subject of our fan fic account...

by sailorstar165 Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:49 pm

Okay. ^_^ I'm going to work on the next chapter of the 14th Noah once I catch up on all the RPs I'm in.

by love4Sora Mon Dec 08, 2008 7:31 pm

that was cold, sailor......but funny (to an extent).

but yeah, back on track.......i'll be more than happy to go through and edit the chapters again, twilight, once you format them and all that. ^_^

by kairiandroxas Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:32 pm

sounds good to me. I'll be able to work on the Furuba one more when i'm done... procrastinating (so, expect it sometime this weekend)

by kairiandroxas Sun Dec 21, 2008 7:53 pm

Sora, do you want me to send you the Fruits Basket RP when I'm done with it or do you just want me to upload it? Or both?

by love4Sora Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:19 pm

well, i gave you the password and all that, didn't i? send me a PM if i didn't.

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